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I'm tumbling down a
rabbit hole
with nothing to
break
my fall.

Shattered bones on the
cold pavement
and my heart
covered
in stitches.

A heart can only be
broken
so many times.

I can only be
broken
once.
©2010 =Tuttlebird
:icontuttlebird:

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It's been far too long since I submitted something so here is the very first poem of 2010.

After this one I really have to find some other inspiration besides Alice's Adventures in Wonderland because it keeps popping up in a lot of the pieces that I'm writing (maybe I could try Through the Looking Glass instead :laughing:). Anyway, enjoy.

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:iconeefera:
I love, love, love that last line. What a punch. Great little piece.

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

:icontuttlebird:
Thanks :)

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Sometimes I get lost between reality and imagination.
:iconsaildust:
Cute, very creative.

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Johnny Depp should be a spokes person for Campbell Soup as he is so mmm... mmm... good.
:icontuttlebird:
Thank you

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Sometimes I get lost between reality and imagination.
:iconihedge:
Heh..I get that. Strange, that our fragile hearts are housed in something even more brittle.

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I see you looking for the ocean, honey
There is a river in you

It's deep in your eyes.
--Jon Foreman
:icontuttlebird:
Very true, no wonder our hearts are easily broken.

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Sometimes I get lost between reality and imagination.
:iconihedge:
Ugh yes. -.-

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I see you looking for the ocean, honey
There is a river in you

It's deep in your eyes.
--Jon Foreman

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